tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post6864158137066354789..comments2023-12-22T17:30:17.075+05:30Comments on Cherry's World: WRITINGS ON THE WEB - NASKA - NOV 2011Roy Cherian Cherukarayilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01448526773188851970noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-54296193040870000382012-02-25T16:14:49.804+05:302012-02-25T16:14:49.804+05:30A good attempt, but can be written much better. Th...A good attempt, but can be written much better. There should be more depth in the description of the character to bring in credibility.Especially when we portray across a large age spectrum of the character it has to be more descriptive and may not be something we can be done in two pages.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-61921124597390875142012-02-24T21:35:08.920+05:302012-02-24T21:35:08.920+05:30Your writings based on true incidents come out muc...Your writings based on true incidents come out much better. There is something missing in the story which I believe is not based out of a true incident. It will be better if you can dwell some more on the main character's life in each age span as he moves through. That will make it more natural. It will certainly need more pages to bring all that in.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-10531979196156543692012-01-27T09:53:34.852+05:302012-01-27T09:53:34.852+05:30Truly inspiring..tremendous imagination...gives a ...Truly inspiring..tremendous imagination...gives a feel as though it was a real one..really wished that it was a true incident..there was a feel good factor to it.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-30104197672943011572012-01-26T09:42:18.635+05:302012-01-26T09:42:18.635+05:30you write well!"you write well!"Rathindranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-74929231371847482782012-01-26T09:24:40.883+05:302012-01-26T09:24:40.883+05:30Hi Roy,
Congratulations!
How are you? At times...Hi Roy,<br /><br /><br />Congratulations!<br /><br /><br />How are you? At times I recall the good times with your guitar-playing and singing sessions at Sanal's place. :-)<br /><br />Good to know about your successes with writing. Best Wishes!<br /><br /><br />Regards,<br />Vijay.Vijay Anand Venugopalannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-53215238673130368742012-01-26T09:20:20.500+05:302012-01-26T09:20:20.500+05:30Good going cherry :)Good going cherry :)Ankurnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-41434755210494580192012-01-26T09:19:00.756+05:302012-01-26T09:19:00.756+05:30Great work Roy ......It's always a pleaseure/t...Great work Roy ......It's always a pleaseure/treat to read your stories/articles.<br />Thanks for the wondeful stories....and keep writing :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-77278993908281762792012-01-26T09:15:10.134+05:302012-01-26T09:15:10.134+05:30As usual simple and great.
Keep it up roy, one day...As usual simple and great.<br />Keep it up roy, one day you are going to be recognised as a great writer and story teller<br />Good luck<br /> <br />regards<br />TNSTNSnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-87340067240074634012012-01-26T09:14:01.079+05:302012-01-26T09:14:01.079+05:30wow ! Hearty Congratulations ji !wow ! Hearty Congratulations ji !Suryanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-5540483770946519972012-01-26T09:11:40.127+05:302012-01-26T09:11:40.127+05:30Congrats Roy. I did read it earlier. Hope to see m...Congrats Roy. I did read it earlier. Hope to see more of them come through.<br /> <br />Regards<br />VinodVinodnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-68732806657163744692012-01-26T09:09:12.716+05:302012-01-26T09:09:12.716+05:30Hi Roy
Good work!!!!
Awesome pictures... I am ...Hi Roy<br /><br />Good work!!!! <br /><br />Awesome pictures... I am stunned to see such pictures created through MS Paint.. You have immense talent.. Proud to be your friend.<br /><br />KrishnaKrishnamoorthynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3476822596569254722.post-4915647588147503372012-01-26T09:06:53.783+05:302012-01-26T09:06:53.783+05:30Congratulations Roy.
Great piece of story which a...Congratulations Roy.<br /><br />Great piece of story which apparently depicts the universal truth that 'Sustained effort and hardwork helps one to acheive their dreams'.Veeranoreply@blogger.com